Rall's Poem

Subject: Rall's Poem Thu Dec 20, 2007 12:39 pm

Winter slowly falls,
A forests and fields of green becomes white,
White sheets covers the land,

A chilly winters gust hushes the land,
Plants and aminals take what shelter they can,
Winter slowly falls,

Only a lone Green Dragon still stays,
Watching winter come to the forest,
greeting it like a old friend,

A human boy slowly approches the dragon,
foots steps heavy in the snow he sits next to the dragon,
Watching to as Winter slowly falls.

Subject: Re: Rall's Poem Thu Dec 20, 2007 1:30 pm

That is a great poem, Rall. Very descriptive.

Subject: Re: Rall's Poem Thu Dec 20, 2007 9:46 pm

Thanks ^.^ i rather like this poem. i'm thinking of making it longer. but i might just leave it as is.

Subject: Re: Rall's Poem Mon Dec 24, 2007 7:35 am

good poem, it creates a clear image.

Subject: Re: Rall's Poem Tue Dec 25, 2007 12:38 am

Thank you Fireclaw ^.=.^

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